Short Story #2: Will You Always Love Me?

     In the short story, "Will You Always Love Me?", one of the main characters, Harry, falls in love with a woman, Andrea, who works in the same building as him. She is different from most women. He can't seem to capture her attention because she is always focused on something else. Eventually, he strikes up a connection between the two of them, but she is still very guarded with her past and doesn't ask him any questions pertaining to his past either. Once they have a relationship for a while, Harry finally finds out about the reasons behind Andrea being so guarded through a telephone call she receives. Andrea then delves into her past with Harry where she entrusts the story of her nineteen-year-old sister's death. Being fifteen at the time of her sister's death, now thirty-four, Andrea is still haunted with the violent, gory details of the murder. The following passage will enlighten you:


This much, Harry learned: In the early evening of April, 13, 1973, Andrea's nineteen-year-old sister Frannie, visiting their widowed grandmother in Wakulla Beach, Florida, was assaulted while walking in a deserted area of the beach-beaten, raped, strangled with her shorts. Her body was dragged into a culvert where it was discovered by a couple walking their dog within an hour, before the grandmother would have had reason to report her missing. Naked from the waist down, her face so badly battered with a rock that her left eye dangled from its socket, the cartilage of her nose was smashed, and teeth broken-Frannie McClure was hardly recognizable. It would be discovered that her vagina and anus had been viciously lacerated and much of her pubic hair torn out. Rape may have occurred after her death. (Oates 614)


     From this disturbing passage, we see yet again the violence in Oates's writing, this being the most violent that I have come across yet. I was extremely taken aback by the violence in this passage, and this makes me even more surprised yet that Oates is offended when people ask her if anything has happened in her past to influence her violent writing. What else would inspire somebody to write such detailed, nauseating, gory descriptions?
     The phone call that Andrea received had to do with the man who was convicted of murdering her sister, and  Andrea was being informed that he was trying to get on parole after being sentenced to prison for life. The thing that I found most interesting about this short story was whether or not the convicted murderer was actually guilty or not. The police seemed to have just found the first drug-addict off the street, and got him to confess to it by confusing him and getting him to do what they wanted. Andrea believes him to be the murderer though, and goes in to speak on behalf of her dead sister to make sure that he stays in jail for the rest of his life.

Short Story #1: Objects in Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear

Overview:

     "I'm actually almost eighteen but look like thirteen. No boobs, and a bitty ass like two half-doughnuts. My skin so pale you can see weird little purple veins in my forehead" (Oates 190). This quote is physically describing the main character in Joyce Carol Oates's short story, "Objects In Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear."A name is never mentioned for this girl, but she has an I.Q. of 162, the average range is considered to be 90-110, so hers is way above average. Also, she does extremely well all throughout high school achieving the high honor roll, until her senior year when her grades aren't so hot. This is portrayed in the following line, "My grades are fucked but they won't keep a "school diploma" from me" (191). This girl isn't failing because she wants to, but rather because her mom is extremely sick and she has had to spend her time selflessly caring for her mom and looking after her.

     However, the real meat of the story does not center on this background information. The main focus of the story is on a man who drives past this girl's house who she recognizes as the handsome man in his thirties who helped her at Eckerd's. Once the girl recognizes that she knows him, she can't stop thinking about him. She thinks, "My premonition is, you will reappear on North Fork Road. Take me by surprise, I won't know when" (191). She sits on her steps waiting for him to drive by and recognize her to take her away from the miserable life she is currently leading. The story ends with the girl's final comment, "Why shouldn't I be happy, I am happy. I'm waiting" (191).

Analysis:

     First of all, I was very surprised that this story didn't contain violence; I was somewhat expecting somebody to get shot at the end. This story did, however, include the harsh reality of a brilliant girl having to put aside her talent to care for her mother. Oates has a way of bringing the reader into a life where the character is helpless to the circumstances they are in because that is the reality of life; sometimes there are circumstances that are beyond a person's control.    

     This short story reminded me of the short story that we discussed today in class, Ursula LeGuin's "The Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas." The recurring theme in LeGuin's short story is happiness and how the people in the city of Omelas are very outwardly happy; however, they are really not happy at all living every day knowing that a child is suffering in order to ensure that their lives remain perfect. In Oates's "Objects In Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear," the girl isn't really happy even though she says that she is in that last line, "Why shouldn't I be happy, I am happy, I'm Waiting" (191). Are you happy when you are waiting in the three-hour line for the Superman ride at Six Flags? Are you happy when you are in the doctor's office waiting for your name to be called? Are you happy when you apply for a job and are waiting for them to contact you? Nobody is ever happy when they are waiting.   

     

    

Interview w/ Oates

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LgJ809QKmas

     In this video, we really get a sense of the passion Oates has for her writing. Oates describes how she creates characters in a process of creating dialogue for them, and developing who they are through that dialogue. Oates can be very inspirational for other writers by teaching them her thought processes. It is great to finally get a complete sense of who she is by watching her and listening to her speak. Do you agree?

Them: Loretta

     Her name was Loretta; she was pleased with that name too, though Loretta Botsford pleased her less. Her last name dragged down on her, it had no melody...Her face was rather full, and there was a slight mischievous puffiness about her cheeks that made her look younger than she was-she was sixteen-and her eyes were blue, a mindless, bland blue, not very sharp. Her lips were painted a deep scarlet, exactly the style of the day. Her eyebrows were plucked in exactly the style of the day...She wore a navy-blue dress pulled in tight at the waist. Her waist was surprisingly narrow, her shoulders a little broad, almost masculine; she was a strong girl. Upon her competent shoulders sat this fluttery, dreamy head, blond hair puffed out and falling down in coquettish curls past her ears, past her collar, down onto her back, so that when she ran along the sidewalk it blew out behind her and men stopped to stare at her; never did she bother to glance back at these men-they were like men in movies who do not appear in the foreground but only focus interest, show which way interest should be directed. She was in love with the thought of this. (15-16)

     As requested, this passage gives a description of the sixteen-year-old Loretta from the previous post on Them from last week. This should give a clear image as to who Loretta was when a murder took place right beside her in bed and also when she got raped.

     As the story unfolds, Loretta gives birth to three children: Jules, Maureen, and Betty. Jules is her firstborn son who is very energetic, and brings new life around the house. The mystery behind Jules is that Loretta is not sure whether he is Bernie's (her first love) or Howard's (her husband) son. The story seems to take a turn from focusing on Loretta to focusing more on Jules.